Hey Easton! I think you have a good idea but I feel like you could've explored your options and creativity a little more in order to dig into the problems society or a certain group faces. I also think that you could specify the price of the product and go in more depth what makes your service so unique.
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Hi Easton! I like the opportunity of your idea as washing and folding laundry can be tedious and time consuming. I like that you adapted your opportunity based on the feedback you received to include perks and advantages to loyal customers. You could explore more areas like how many business days the service will take and how you plan to cater to your customers to choose to pay for your service over doing laundry themselves or another local laundromat they already use.
Here's the link to my second elevator pitch if you'd like to check it out:
Ok a couple of things I like the idea but you don't explain the process, does a truck come to your house, do you leave your clothes on the doorstep, what keeps my clothes from being lost, what does this cost me. Secondly your pitch is way to short which makes it sound like an undeveloped plan. Thirdly you know you can embed your video. Check out my business about bring down organic food costs at http://mrdreaces.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Easton! I think it’s great that you took the time to go through the feedback and decide which feedback you wanted to implement. I think the loyalty program is a great idea. It will definitely help entice people to use your service. Having only watched your second elevator pitch, I wish you had given a little bit of background information about your service since I don’t know much about how it works. Overall, you did a great job! If you want to check out my pitch here’s the link: http://charlysbizblog.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Easton! I think you have a good idea but I feel like you could've explored your options and creativity a little more in order to dig into the problems society or a certain group faces. I also think that you could specify the price of the product and go in more depth what makes your service so unique.
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http://vifrasier.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-number-2-week-7.html
Hi Easton! I like the opportunity of your idea as washing and folding laundry can be tedious and time consuming. I like that you adapted your opportunity based on the feedback you received to include perks and advantages to loyal customers. You could explore more areas like how many business days the service will take and how you plan to cater to your customers to choose to pay for your service over doing laundry themselves or another local laundromat they already use.
ReplyDeleteHere's the link to my second elevator pitch if you'd like to check it out:
http://gregneatrours.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Ok a couple of things I like the idea but you don't explain the process, does a truck come to your house, do you leave your clothes on the doorstep, what keeps my clothes from being lost, what does this cost me. Secondly your pitch is way to short which makes it sound like an undeveloped plan. Thirdly you know you can embed your video. Check out my business about bring down organic food costs at
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Hey Easton! I think it’s great that you took the time to go through the feedback and decide which feedback you wanted to implement. I think the loyalty program is a great idea. It will definitely help entice people to use your service. Having only watched your second elevator pitch, I wish you had given a little bit of background information about your service since I don’t know much about how it works. Overall, you did a great job! If you want to check out my pitch here’s the link: http://charlysbizblog.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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